Seems like a fine page to me (I don't know the area). Only critique is that the page leaves the impression there is only one route to the top, which is almost never the case. Are there no other trails? Is travel off-trail forbidden? Is there some barrier preventing other approaches? On the map both south and west look like very reasonable approaches with very close road access, and the satellite view shows lots of tracks in most directions.
The route I described is definitely the most popular, but other approaches are not out of the question just quite a cross-country haul through some nasty brush. Thanks for the comments though. My page(s) is still a work in progress.
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