To improve the page, you could add links and info as found on Whitney Page. You might even provide a link to the Whitney Page (since it has most of the red tape/camping/access info for many of the peaks in this area). I did something like this for Mt. Muir. Have you climbed the peak? If so, add route page and sign the summit log.
Also, you should incorporate the Etymology info onto the main page rather than leave it as "more info". That way visitors can read it without having to click through. Easiest way is to make an "Etymology" section and put it last in the order.