
Voted 10/10 | Excellent writing! Very well done. Here are a few ideas that would make it even better.
1. Revise the red tape section, as I've posted.
2. Make photo #61124 also the signiature shot.
3. Add some basic info on the normal route.
4. Change the name of the peak to "Gasherbrum 1". You already indicated the other names for it in the first paragraph.
5. Add it to the 8,000 meter group page, as suggested below.
Cheers. |