Your pages are improving - keep up the good work! I would suggest re-reading the text to correct spelling/grammar mistakes - there are about 6-8 that I noticed in reading it.
Nice work here! Be careful about advocating trespassing, though - I don't have a beef with it but a lot of folks read these pages and someone might complain. Liked the panorama too....
watch out for rangers who don't want you to stand too close to the edge because you don't have "protective equipment" even though you're only 10 feet off the ground. in case you didn't notice we had an issue with a ranger. he was a complete tool.