
Voted 8/10 | You should keep your text under the picture on the main page, I looked right past the line above it, so your page seemed to start with "it has three glaciers..."
Check the FAQ section for html info. You got the picture up thats cool but you need links.
Personally I do my "getting there" with bullets, but that's just a preference. You can find out how to use bullets in the HTML section.
Mountain Conditions: This is a key, key section. You should have links to weather forecast, Avy info, etc. What kind of slopes are we going to be on, south facing? north? how steep? etc. This is extremely important if you're mentioning skiing.
When to climb: "generally"? Why? why might i want to climb this peak at "x" time of year instead of "x" time.
Red tape: Do I need a parking pass? where can I get one? What is the phone number of the nearest ranger station? Do they have a website? etc.
Great addition to SP and I'll upgrade my vote when you worked the kinks out (I won't leave you hangin'), Good job, thanks for Erie too. I could probably benefit from some of my own advice as well, I'm not knockin' I'm trying to be constructive
-Scotty
update getting better man, keep it up. |