the topo's been field tested ;) and passed with flying colors. One thing I'd add is a #5 Camalot works well on the 25 foot OW at top of P2 - no 6" Big Bro needed. In fact, one needs to walk this large piece while climbing (Big Bro is probably not that good for this). My two cents.
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