Good effort! A few suggestions before "upgrading" my vote:
- Getting There: you describe the directieons from some villages that the average SP-member probably doesn't know. It would be nice to have a direction from the nearest airport or town
- Red Tape: What are the Mayan customs. Could be quite interesting to have a couple of descriptions here
- When to climb: when is the dry season. Might be obvious to you but it's a puzzle to me
- Mountain conditions: I think it's always useful to have a link to a weather site which perhaps doesn't have any specific information on the summit but the general weather. I suppose there could be something for Guatemala somewhere.
These are suggestions to help you fill the page which at the moment is rather short and empty. Think of it as encouragement which it is supposed to be (from my side).
My comments echo what Gangolf had to say... good start.