The main page reads more like a trip report than about basic information on the peak. I would suggest writing your personal experiences as a trip report or in the summit log, both of which can be attached to the mountain.
It's definitely a worthwhile peak for inclusion, so thanks for taking the time/effort to submit it!
I agree with Bob's comment + it would be great if you can upload some pictures/select a signature one. Please reply to this comment once you update the page and I will revisit my rating.
I would have loved to post pictures, but my camera froze with in an hour of leaving the car. I will try to get a picture from highway 395 though.
Agree with the other comments. With only a little more work, this would be a 4 star page.