I stopped reading the route description because it didn't flow cleanly (ie punctuation, run on sentences etc). A bit disappointed....
Please point out any specific punction mistakes and run-ons and I'll gladly seek to improve my prose. I appreciate feedback and strive to make my writing as clear and as compelling as possible. p.s. -- I believe "i.e." is the usual punctuation.
Dave Daly - Nov 27, 2006 11:20 pm - Voted 7/10
Narrative?I stopped reading the route description because it didn't flow cleanly (ie punctuation, run on sentences etc). A bit disappointed....
MichaelJ - Nov 28, 2006 8:02 am - Hasn't voted
Examples?Please point out any specific punction mistakes and run-ons and I'll gladly seek to improve my prose. I appreciate feedback and strive to make my writing as clear and as compelling as possible.
p.s. -- I believe "i.e." is the usual punctuation.