Good Start, keep at it.
Please add more text in every section, photos, summit log or trip reports, more books (if in amazon.com) and more routes.
I understand that you have not successfully summited the peak, but you will see that the Summit Log section has a location to check that you did not summit. It would probably be a good idea to sign a summit log under this condition in order to give a little bit more visible legitimacy to your ownership of the page. I agree that more pictures would be nice, but currently it looks good.
For what it's worth, there's an approach that will save you 3-4 miles. The access road to West Tensleep trailhead splits to the left and right near the beginning. Bearing right takes you to West Tensleep trailhead. Bearing left takes you to Battle Park trailhead. This trail will take you to Lake Solitude which lies near the SW opening to Wilderness Basin. This approach is more moderate and miles shorter....saving you lots of time. Either way will get you there. :)