Baldy Bowl


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ClaireJ - Jan 21, 2009 3:37 pm - Hasn't voted

Bad Poetry as Caption

Out of drifts
a pillar rises like a dial

allowing frozen hours to melt
in thick drops

a stillness that shoulders belief
and dilates the instant into the long
or the long into the brief


yatsek - Jan 25, 2009 8:24 am - Voted 10/10

Not Bad!

Good hiking image.


ClaireJ - Jan 25, 2009 8:14 pm - Hasn't voted

Re: Not Bad!

I thank you Yatsek. You are tolerant. ;-)


yatsek - Jan 26, 2009 5:33 am - Voted 10/10

Re: Not Bad!

Right you are, and my students liked the fact but I'm also objective (always used to win the student opinion survey in this category) and demanding (some didn't like it but I guess you might :))

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