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ClaireJ - Jan 21, 2009 3:37 pm - Hasn't voted
Bad Poetry as CaptionOut of drifts
a pillar rises like a dial
allowing frozen hours to melt
in thick drops
a stillness that shoulders belief
and dilates the instant into the long
or the long into the brief
yatsek - Jan 25, 2009 8:24 am - Voted 10/10
Not Bad!Good hiking image.
ClaireJ - Jan 25, 2009 8:14 pm - Hasn't voted
Re: Not Bad!I thank you Yatsek. You are tolerant. ;-)
yatsek - Jan 26, 2009 5:33 am - Voted 10/10
Re: Not Bad!Right you are, and my students liked the fact but I'm also objective (always used to win the student opinion survey in this category) and demanding (some didn't like it but I guess you might :))
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