Better. I still think the sentences describing the views from the summit belong in the overview, not the route section. Also, please give more of a hint about where to find camping.
Thanks for adding. Good pix of a far away place. Bet you could see High Knob (Big Stone Gap) from there.
I think its a good page. You might want to make a route page to make others happy, but I think you've got enough. With a bushwhack it is hard to describe a route in much detail considering no one will take the exact same route. Nice work and take care!
Looks like you are still working on it, but I think it is still good enough for 4 stars.