Already quite a good page. I would suggest you do the following changes:
See Gangolf's comments.
You have the photos for a really informative route page about the hourglass couloir - they practically walk you through it, if you'd just put together a route page to organize them.
If it's a neighbor of Mt. Dade, it's gotta be good.
Good page. Someday I'll have to climb it.
Nice Addition to SP, Thanks! A few very minor, picky suggestions:
- There are still a few spelling and grammer errors (looks like you corrected a few since I first looked at the page).
- As others have mentioned...a signature photo would be great.