"Got tight last night on absinthe and did knife tricks. Great success shooting the knife into the piano. The woodworms are so bad and eat hell out of all furniture that you can always claim the woodworms did it."
--Ernest Hemingway
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Buz Groshong - Feb 3, 2015 11:54 am - Voted 10/10
text clean upYou need to go through the text and get rid of the superfluous hard returns. Also, it would read better if it weren't all in bold.
One more: "ecologically raped" is incorrect; ecology is the study of ecosystems. Also the statement is totally unnecessary, since you also said it was exploited.