Great job on that route- not too far from me, I'll need to get there soon.
Your route description is lacking some basic beta, such as how many pitches? Granted it sounds like a trivial climb but you should at least give some indication of the vertical distance to be gained.
Overall a pretty good description. Love the detailed approach...that neighborhood can be a headache to navigate through. The more detail the better on this mountain because there are so many little trails that lead to nowhere and people get lost up there pretty often.