The previous voters were a little over-critical. All-in-all, a thoughtfully-written page. To spice it up a bit, you could move some photos to one section or another when you edit the page. Also might provide more detailed info on contact information for whatever government department has jurisdiction over the area.
"As an adolescent I aspired to lasting fame, I craved factual certainty, and I thirsted for a meaningful vision of human life - so I became a scientist. This is like becoming an archbishop so you can meet girls."