I think you're doing a fine job with this page. There have been some good comments made on the thread you started. One additional suggestion is to add this mountain to the John Muir Wilderness mountain groups section.
"After the first glass, you see things as you wish they were. After the second, you see things as they are not. Finally, you see things as they really are, which is the most horrible thing in the world."
--Oscar Wilde on Absinthe