Good start, but the page needs a few more details. Maybe you already planned to do that though. Also, make sure to provide directions to La Sal Pass rather than just referring to another page. South Mountain is the tallest southernmost peak of the La Sal Mountains of Utah (11817' or 3602m elevation). Perhaps this sentence would read better as "South Mountain is the southernmost tall peak of the La Sal Mountains of Utah"? Adding some more photos to the front page would be nice too (if you haven't already planned to do that). If you need help with this part, let me know.
thanks, Scott. I'm still working on it. I appreciate your feedback!
Sounds good. I'll be looking forward to seeing the final page.
Scott - Jun 18, 2014 9:58 am - Hasn't voted
Good startGood start, but the page needs a few more details. Maybe you already planned to do that though.
Also, make sure to provide directions to La Sal Pass rather than just referring to another page.
South Mountain is the tallest southernmost peak of the La Sal Mountains of Utah (11817' or 3602m elevation).
Perhaps this sentence would read better as "South Mountain is the southernmost tall peak of the La Sal Mountains of Utah"?
Adding some more photos to the front page would be nice too (if you haven't already planned to do that). If you need help with this part, let me know.
utahjimk - Jun 18, 2014 10:14 am - Hasn't voted
Re: Good startthanks, Scott. I'm still working on it. I appreciate your feedback!
Scott - Jun 18, 2014 10:40 am - Hasn't voted
Re: Good startSounds good. I'll be looking forward to seeing the final page.