You have made a solid beginning with this page. I would expand significantly on the wilderness area's position in the Sangre's as well as the general nature of the terrain. In short, you want to make the area sound attractive and interesting to people who are not familiar to the area.
I would also select a signature image for this page (and your Pajarito page). I added an OK image from the Williams Lake area. You can add existing images from the pages of the various peaks in the wilderness area.
Lastly, I would insert pictures along with the text to illustrate the points you are making.
I think you have solid information here and a good page. I hope you take these suggestions in the positive spirit in which they are tendered. Good luck!
Bubba Suess - Nov 4, 2008 3:52 pm - Voted 10/10
Good start!You have made a solid beginning with this page. I would expand significantly on the wilderness area's position in the Sangre's as well as the general nature of the terrain. In short, you want to make the area sound attractive and interesting to people who are not familiar to the area.
I would also select a signature image for this page (and your Pajarito page). I added an OK image from the Williams Lake area. You can add existing images from the pages of the various peaks in the wilderness area.
Lastly, I would insert pictures along with the text to illustrate the points you are making.
I think you have solid information here and a good page. I hope you take these suggestions in the positive spirit in which they are tendered. Good luck!
scotthsu - Nov 8, 2008 12:52 am - Hasn't voted
Re: Good start!thanks for your very good suggestions. progress has been slow lately, but i will try to get back to it!