But it would probably be a lot easier to read if you broke it up into paragraphs. I had a hard time following the text. Glad to hear everyone was fine, and congrats on your marriage!
yeah, sorry about that. I've received that comment before. :) I'll fix 'er up. Thanks for the wishes!
WoundedKnee - Jul 22, 2007 1:24 am - Voted 10/10
Nice storyBut it would probably be a lot easier to read if you broke it up into paragraphs. I had a hard time following the text.
Glad to hear everyone was fine, and congrats on your marriage!
Jeremy Hakes - Jul 23, 2007 10:45 am - Hasn't voted
Re: Nice storyyeah, sorry about that. I've received that comment before. :) I'll fix 'er up. Thanks for the wishes!